These are excerpts from two different critiques I received for the same story. They came in less than 16 hours apart…
1. “But I like your style, I’ll read anything you want to send me. And seriously, thanks for putting something out there. It’s not often lately that I find a workshop story that holds my attention all the way to the end.”
2. “Poor writing style with a weak ending left me with a story I really don’t feel was worth the time i invested to read.”
– Brennan Harvey